hi just wanted to get some feedback about this little guy he is going to be my new character for a series of mini episodes that i wanna create

the concept is simple he is a FLAME BOY!!!! he can't handle it and he want's to give an end to it
so he tries to end his life by drinking a glass of water or with a water gun and so on but with no success at the end of the mini episodes he will find the meaning of life and what it means to be a Flame Boy!!!

what do you think ?
let me know !!!
i 'll be posting 3d models of flame boy soon enough

p.s i am not a 2d artist i just make sketches to help me with the 3d procedure
thank you